Thank you! I was playing around with this whole hidden thoughts thing, and I wanted to portray Pete's uncertainty toward this new daughter of his--the parentheses seem the best way to do that.
I really appreciate you taking the time to read this, by the way. :) Thanks for reviewing!
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Date: 2008-09-20 02:27 am (UTC)I really appreciate you taking the time to read this, by the way. :) Thanks for reviewing!